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雅思小作文高分范文来啦!表格题你会吗?

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雅思小作文高分范文——表格,这是一道在雅思写作考试中不太多见的题目,之所以选择它是因为这个表格中的数据颇有意思。

题目

The table below shows the proportion of dillerent categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feaiures and make comparisons where relevant. (C4T1)

范文

The percentage of different sorts of households suffering from poverty in 1999 in Australia is indicated by this table. As a whole, 11% families including 1, 837,000 people were living impoverished lives.

The percentage of sole-parent families took up the highest proportion at 21% consisting of 232,000 people, closely followed by the type of family with one adult and without any children(19% comprising 359, 000 persons). Although only 12% of families with two adults and children were enduring poverty, families in this type contained the most people 933, 000.

7%o of adult couples without any children were poor, and 211,000 people belonged to this type of household. Meanwhile, the figure for the family with only one single aged person merely made up 6%, including 54, 000 seniors. 24,000 old couples were plagued by poverty, occupying only 4%.

In all, the family with one or two old family members could stay away from being poor, and the family containing one adult with or without children got relatively more possibilities to encounter the poverty.

此表格示了1999年在澳大利亚遭受穷的不同类型家庭的百分比。整体而言,有11%的家庭,总计183.7万人正过着贫穷的生活。

单亲家庭占据了最高的比例21%,包含了23.2万人,紧随其后的家庭类型是单身无子女的成年人家庭(19%,包含35.9万人)。尽管只有12%的有子女的成年夫妻组成的家庭正在忍受贫穷,但是这种家庭类型包含的人数最多,达到93.3万人。

在成年夫妻无子女的家庭中有7%是贫穷的,有21.1万人属于这种家庭类型。同时,只有一位单身老年人组成的家庭类型的比例仅为6%,包含5.4万位考年人。有2.4万对者年夫妻正遭受穷的折磨,占比为4%。

总之,有一位或者两位老年家庭成员的家庭类型可以远离贫穷,同时,由一位成年人组成的家庭类型相对来讲遭遇贫穷的可能性更高,无论这位成年人有无子女。

名师点评

首先,题目中给出的数据不多,因此考生在写作过程中要尽量提及各个数据;其次,将题目中的数据进行分类,通过题我们发现表格中有一个比较明显的数据1%,即 all households对应的量,它代表在澳大利亚全国易受贫穷的家庭比例。

据此,可以把表格中的数据分为两类:高于 all households比例的(包括单亲家庭、单身无子女的成年人家庭和有子女的成年夫妻组成的家庭)和低于 all households比例的(包括成年夫妻无子女的家庭、一位单身老年人组成的家庭和老年夫妻组成的家庭)。这样,本题就清晰了许多。

将文章分成四段。首段改写题目,还直接描述了11%这一数据的含义。

主一段重点描述第一种类別的家庭类型一一数值上高于11%的家庭类型。

随后的主二段描述第二种类别的家庭类型数值上低于11%的家庭类型。最后一段总结所有数据的特征。

这类静态表格题在雅思写作考试中不太常见,如果在考试中与各位考生狭路相逢,大家一定要注意将数据合理归类,归类的方法就是全文段落安排的写作逻辑。